Tons to do this week, so not much time for blogging, but I just wanted to offer a short observation on The Hobbit (see what I did there? Go on, laugh. Go on. Please…?)
Always end with a bang.
A lot of screenwriters spend a lot of time on the first thirty pages of their script. And so they should: if the first thirty pages aren’t spectacular, the chances of the rest ever getting read are pretty damn poor. But if the first thirty pages are the ones getting all the love and attention at script stage -
Then the last thirty are the pages that should get the attention at the plotting, planning and prepping stage.
If you don’t end with a bang, you don’t really have a movie.
And even if you don’t really have a movie, ending with a bang might save your backside.
The Hobbit is pretty slow and pretty meandering for the first ninety minutes plus. Part of that is down to stretching the story to three movies, part is down to the largely episodic nature of the original material. Neither of those is really an excuse for the movie as delivered, by the way. Adaption is a process of fixing problems, not causing or replicating them. But that’s not what I’m here to talk about.
Because, despite the languid ramble through the history of Middle Earth, despite the unnecessary rock giants and the heavy-handed attempt to model the structure on The Fellowship Of The Ring, something sent me out of that cinema with a big grin on my face and eager to see it again ASAP.
And that something was the last 45 – 60 minutes.
Ever been to a film or a children’s stage play with a five-year-old? Chances are they’ll be shuffling, muttering and looking in random directions for 90% of the event. But at the end, they’ll insist it was brilliant and they had the best time ever – because the only bits they remember are the two or three scenes that genuinely gripped them. They’ve totally forgotten that they were ever bored, because the experience of the good bits massively outweighs the bad.
Well, adult cinema audiences aren’t that much different. Their mood as they leave the cinema will be largely dictated by the ending. Give them an upbeat ending where the hero comes into his own and triumphs, at least in part; where plot points pay off and surprises are delivered; send them out saying “Wow, wasn’t that final bit brilliant?” and they’ll be happy.
Of course, send them out saying “Wasn’t the whole thing brilliant?”, and then you’ve really got something…